ok so theres a couple of things wrong with this.
btw im just saying this to help you improve and to be a better artist, im not trying to start a internet flame war or anything.
1. your buildup on the intro was too generic. i mean like, volume buildup?
the claps really annoying too, you introduce it way too soon. I would try to change that buildup by introducing stuff 1by 1, example, pad cutoff intro, piano intro cutoff, lead intro, add in some hats w/ bass, and then do a 1-2bar pause and then let it all jump out, add in a clap after 1 repetition after the pause.
2. your breakdown transition was good, but after that it kinda died. it wasnt really a breakdown, just a more mellow version of the melody. at your breakdown you need to make a piano, pad, bells, something calm.
3. master, and eq your hats + leads more pls
for 2 months, this is pretty good though.
im giving you a 5 and an 8,
4.07 / 5.00 (+ 0.075)
good advice, ill try it, thanks! =]
turned out pretty awesome :)
good job :P
4.55 / 5.00 (+ 0.55)
sounds really 8 bit :P
its pretty good, just keep on practicing nd trying new things
2.89 / 5.00 (+ 0.24)
the songs needs a definite bass though, its too jumpy here.
also you cant really hear the main melodys, just a bunch of melodys put together, mastering could fix that
if you trying to make club music, id recomeed layering kicks, as it has to be really hard.
but still, this is pretty cool :)
4.08 / 5.00 (+ 0.022)
add me on msn email@example.com if you need some tips or summin
thanks, i made a new song, check that out too! =]
3.99 / 5.00 (+ 0.047)
Thanks for the support! :D
i agree with the guy below,
i love that intro synth thing :P
good job on this
3.15 / 5.00 (+ 0.24)
Haha thanks!! I still dunno what intro synth thing you're talking about though.
love the bass in this one :)
you should lower the velocity of the chord notes though, so they dont stand out as much :P
4.42 / 5.00 (+ 0.19)
this is probably, the most intense ambient music i have ever heard :P
this is actually really good though, but some mastering would go well. besides that , great job :)
check out my work pls :)
3.82 / 5.00 (+ 0.095)
It's wierd, when I mastered it, my monitors kept showing me there was no clipping at all, but when I listen to it there's random parts that clip and they don't even show up on the monitor :(
thanks for the review
this is great
cant really find anything wrong, except the pause might be alittle to long at around 1.00 min
and the claps sound alittle bit too reverbed on my speakers. might just be me though
overall good job,
1.81 / 5.00 (+ 1.81)
good luck with this :) sounds like an ace :P
Yea the clap is just you, and I dunno what pauses you're talking about.
Also, I guess somebody 0 bombed me already. Guess it's really an ace! LUL!
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